Thx for PM me...
...and because of this you get a review from me again ;)
First of all - like the earlier version - it stays a fine tune... fun to hear... making me daydream. The greatets change is the baseline with the drums, rounding up the whole set of instruments - nice idea. Giving it some kind of a heartbeat... boosting my opinion that it is most suited for an ending theme, sad but with a ray of hope (you remember? :) )... but with a more dramatic touch.
Only thing is, that the baseline of the drum seems a little bit out of rythm, and is for my taste a lil too hard. But that is only my opinion, maybe the greater part of the audience likse it that way. Not that it is bad, but it irriteds me a bit. Would find it more fitting to be more like a pulse of a lifesign, smooth flowing with and underlining the main melody (eg piano or string), if you understand what I am trying to say ^.^
Good new idea, right way for changes to go, but needs fien tuning - well done anyway.