Not Bad
Some parts kind of slowed down the movie and you also needed some kind of background/score music to make it a little more interesting. Other than that, this series is gonna be great.
Reviews for "Brunch Of The Dead Ep.2"
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
I had to cut some music out because of file size problems. I will infact most likely have to make more episodes, but they will be shorter...inorder to show all of the sequences and hear all of the sounds. So what I'll do, because I know Episode 4 and 5 are big, I'll kinda split those two into two more episodes, most likely.
Anyways, thank you for commenting, and I'm glad that you're getting into the the series/big movie.
Hey
I dunno if you remember me, anyway, I like the way you improved even a little. I notice there was a little emotion in the dialogue before, but you've improved especially the hillarious shrieks (good job by the way), and you're sequencing also have improved it has more flow than before, still it needs more improvements but I bet you'll get there. Your sound fx sounded good (the ones you didn't record), but again the sound recording is my most concern but I overlooked that this time. Umm...suggestions (if you don't mind) try to animate the entire zombies (the ones shadowed in black esp) and with the guy falling slow mode fx use more than one copy of him (at least 3) gradually fading one from before.
Ur still 16 u have plenty of time to be great at it. Also nice to see some1 who can take criticism.
P.S Great job with the vibrating hand joke, clever.
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
Thank you for your awesome and helpful review to start off with. I'm flattered to hear that you acknowledged my improvement. The problem with having alot of zombies being animated on screen, or at least in Episode 2, was file size. With Flash 5, you can watch a separate scene in a loop and when the file is in a folder, the description will show it's MB space. The scene where The Hero runs past zombies that are following him, I used to have more zombies there who were all walking. Turns out when I read the description for it, the file size was already 1MB! That's too much.
What I will do however is make sure I get everything I want to put in this series by possibly creating more episodes, which I don't think anyone really cares. My personal goal was for 6 episodes, but turns out it may be a little more. More episodes for people to watch (thumbsup to people you enjoy this series).
The slow mode fx could've been executed a litte better I admit, but I had to cut a little more out. The file size of Episode 2 is nearly 5 MBs (the Newgrounds limit).
Thank you once again for the criticism. Criticism is a flashlight to the hand in a room of darkness, and bashing is blindfold over the eyes. I'm glad you liked the vibrating scene, lol.
well done
its definately one of the better ones ive seen today, good job
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
That's more than good to hear. Hopefully you'll see Episode 1 if you haven't checked that one yet. Thanks for the compliments :)
wow
fix the voice overs rofl the mouth was still moving after he was done talking but other then that it was nice....o and whats up with the chick who has a guys voice...thats creepier then all hell unless u like that sort of thing..u kno shemales...rofl w/e good work i guess.
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
yeah, i always had a problem with the synching... the idea of girl man was pretty much a girl that had a man's voice. lol
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well the thing really didn't have much to do with ep 1 ,but it was more action packed then the first and well that was a hell of a amount of blood from the first zombie he shot it like once or twice and it liked exploded with blood everywhere
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
an episode on its own... but I'm glad you enjoyed it.