Not Bad
Some parts kind of slowed down the movie and you also needed some kind of background/score music to make it a little more interesting. Other than that, this series is gonna be great.
Reviews for "Brunch Of The Dead Ep.2"
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
I had to cut some music out because of file size problems. I will infact most likely have to make more episodes, but they will be shorter...inorder to show all of the sequences and hear all of the sounds. So what I'll do, because I know Episode 4 and 5 are big, I'll kinda split those two into two more episodes, most likely.
Anyways, thank you for commenting, and I'm glad that you're getting into the the series/big movie.
Hey
I dunno if you remember me, anyway, I like the way you improved even a little. I notice there was a little emotion in the dialogue before, but you've improved especially the hillarious shrieks (good job by the way), and you're sequencing also have improved it has more flow than before, still it needs more improvements but I bet you'll get there. Your sound fx sounded good (the ones you didn't record), but again the sound recording is my most concern but I overlooked that this time. Umm...suggestions (if you don't mind) try to animate the entire zombies (the ones shadowed in black esp) and with the guy falling slow mode fx use more than one copy of him (at least 3) gradually fading one from before.
Ur still 16 u have plenty of time to be great at it. Also nice to see some1 who can take criticism.
P.S Great job with the vibrating hand joke, clever.
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
Thank you for your awesome and helpful review to start off with. I'm flattered to hear that you acknowledged my improvement. The problem with having alot of zombies being animated on screen, or at least in Episode 2, was file size. With Flash 5, you can watch a separate scene in a loop and when the file is in a folder, the description will show it's MB space. The scene where The Hero runs past zombies that are following him, I used to have more zombies there who were all walking. Turns out when I read the description for it, the file size was already 1MB! That's too much.
What I will do however is make sure I get everything I want to put in this series by possibly creating more episodes, which I don't think anyone really cares. My personal goal was for 6 episodes, but turns out it may be a little more. More episodes for people to watch (thumbsup to people you enjoy this series).
The slow mode fx could've been executed a litte better I admit, but I had to cut a little more out. The file size of Episode 2 is nearly 5 MBs (the Newgrounds limit).
Thank you once again for the criticism. Criticism is a flashlight to the hand in a room of darkness, and bashing is blindfold over the eyes. I'm glad you liked the vibrating scene, lol.
Another great movie
I like this series so far, it is getting really good. The action is great, and very disgusting at that. I think it would have looked better in color, but you still did a great job. Keep this up man, very good graphics and sounds.
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
Thanks for the great compliments on the series so far. The black and white does censor gore in away, but don't worry. I'll surprise everybody in the last episode on how it doesn't matter what colour it is, heh. Glad ya liked Episode 2 and the series so far.
pretty cool
that was good good job on drawing the Zombies!!
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
Thanks for commenting. Glad ya liked the zombie drawings :)
getting better
ok now i can see the comedy part of the movie. the guys hand reminded me of army of the dead ; ). Still, need improvement with the audio and graphic.
Riotcomix-2006 responds:
The first episode is supposed to be quirky dialogue, mean't do be funny at parts, but quirky nonetheless. Episode 1 must set the series up. Episode 2 is the rising action now, so now viewers will start to see what great potential this series has. Thank you for the review once again :)