Reviews for Jersey Girl (ft Ryan Wariki)

[YoinK]

cool song

flow is very good. Sounds very good. You should try to use more syllabils for your rhymes. Other than that. good song.

jerseyendless responds:

thanks yoink, and i understand what your sayin. we'll try to use more syllables in our rhymes in the next time. aiight keep it real man. peace!!!

-Jersey Endless

[lucid08]

Hm...

You know, merc's got a point. You have an occasional change, but for the most part your rhyme schemes are pretty elementary...Not tryna hate but you should try to make it more complex. Might be uploading some raps of my own soon, so you'll see what I'm talkin about :P 4/5

[KIRBYKAGE219]

PURE TALENT

STILL NEVER DISAPOINTED KEEP UP DA FRESHNESS

jerseyendless responds:

once again thanks kirbykage. keep it real man, peace!!!

-Jersey Endless

[mseemercury]

ok now this is a hate

all i can say is step up your use of vocabulary great flow but you seem to always use the easiest words i know you got it man

[Broken-Needle]

Nice

Doesn't sound 100% professional but ur getting pretty close man, good shit on the beat tho, got ma 5
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

jerseyendless responds:

thanks BN, keep it real, peace!!!

-Jersey Endless