boppin to dis :D
Love this beat and reppin jersey hot keep it up man :D
Reviews for "Jersey Girl (ft Ryan Wariki)"
jerseyendless responds:
aha thanks 4 the review man
we appreciate it.
check out our other stuff homie.
peace
This... is friggin amazing
Dude this is friggin great... the beat has a that oldschool sound down!
The lyrics are gr8 2!!!
jerseyendless responds:
thanks alot man.
i love to hear it when people like our music :]
thanks for the support
awesome!
I really like this song and have got a question: can i make a german cover of the song? therefore i would like to have the riddim.
jerseyendless responds:
yea dude totally. if you need the beat i'll put it up a.s.a.p
The singing....
I'm sorry you took such a big offense to my last critique. Didn't know all the cool kids were listening to Jerseyendless these days, I'm sorry for not "keeping up". Anyways, if you're a real artist, you shouldn't be pissed at honest critiques dude.
Now that, that's out of the way...
Pros:
- I like the oldschool vibe, it's relaxing and fits really well.
- Nice thoughtful song that any special lady will go giddy over.
- The singing that echoes words during the verse is a nice touch.
Cons:
- Rhymes are a little too simplified and cliche.
- Flow is almost there, but not quite.
- The chorus singing is way off key. Sounds like I used to sound...
Overall:
Nice song overall, but too simplistic and overdone.
jerseyendless responds:
i didnt say that everyone was listening to jersey endless. i said that you and ppl like chucktown and cronof and ppl like that criticize on our older stuff and not knowing that we've somewhat improved over the months, or some think that we've shown no improvement. anyways, thanks for the critique, but some of the stuff you said in the cons is the stuff we were already told. we'll be working on having more complex word play and flow and all the other stuff you've said, but your the first to say that the singing is off key. we'll work on that too.
REspectable.
Lots of potential - good singing voice - good love song.
good beat.
the filter u got rockin on your voice. u need to edit. to much echo - room effet...
could be much better
defintly give u.. a 2
haha jk 7 - fix it and its worth 9
second rapper - is good good flow
jerseyendless responds:
we'll try to take out the echos next time and work on the flows of the first rapper (steve) but he has gotten better over the years. but anyways, thanks for the review man, peace!!!
KLZ
Jersey Endless