i really liked it
That was a really good poem. You do seem to have an artistic nature. I hope it stays on ng for a long time
i really liked it
That was a really good poem. You do seem to have an artistic nature. I hope it stays on ng for a long time
nice
Well I wasn't expecting that for the ending, til I saw the word "death". In the beginning, this seemed like it was about a guy in love with some girl (since the title is also called "courting". Sure, life can be miserable and full of suffering, but you get over things like this. What was it that was getting you down anyways? Basically you can just live out your life, and someday death will be knocking out your door, so just enjoy what you can for now. And if you want to find out what is to come after death, then you can maybe look into the bible. I found some really good answers there, like in regards to the meaning of life, why there is suffering, and what happens to the soul after you die. And suicide definitely is not the answer. Hope you'll stay okay. It's not good to feel sad.
that was nice
yeah...
very nicley done
i liked the concept . exallent drawings. a suggestion though. you should maybe try to show a picture of the girl and the good time they had together. and maybe just one flash of him killing him self just like a far away view and make the moment add up to it. nicley done
verry nice
it has very great quality, and a nice ending you should send it into the poetry contest.