nice
I think that was brilliant.
Reviews for "Courting"
Yeah poetry huh
Your poety needs a little work. It seams like you were streching for words that rhyme together. Although the liked the twist at the end.
P.S. suicide is the cowards way out.
Halley responds:
Yes it is, that's why I'm not dead!
Yeah, when I was writing it I never thought anyone would see it.
It's not exactly my forte.
(But that one guy said that I'm the next Poe! so...hm.)
I'll work on it! ;)
your crazy ..
you need to change your life! find your flaws and fix them ..
WATCH THE PASSION !!!!
;-P
Halley responds:
I already saw it!
Yeah it was a sweet movie.
Really powerful!
loved the blood when they were nailing him to the cross!
Yeah, and I'm trying to be a better person!
A little poem for you...
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your graphics were awesome
But your poem sucked major ass
Alright I suppose
It was alright, nothing incredible. Both the poem and the character's voice sound immature, and end up trivialising the content to that of a 15-year old goth-metal-head.
Still nice flash though!
Halley responds:
Um... excuse me? SEVENTEEN year old goth-metal-head thank you very much!
(tsk... 15...the idea...)
But I'm glad you liked the Flash! ;)