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Reviews for "anime #1 REAL .VER.!"

Better, but now too slow...

like I said if your other entry, a "next" button after each setp would be nice.

skull-basher responds:

alright..Im working on that right now..but thanks for the review!

Not optimised >:|

That music is making this movie huge, me thinks. Remember to use WAVs so that Flash can compress the music well.

It wasn't that enlightening, or educational, but you can draw.

skull-basher responds:

thanks..in your next review of my tutorials could you tell me what I could do to improve? (besides optimizing music)

Okay, not a bad start

First off you clearly have talent as an artist. The tips you give are great. The reason I gave you a low score is because the "Flash" portion wasn't so hot. You should make some buttons so you can click through the movie. A good tutorial will give you plenty of time to read, analyze and move at your own pace. Also consider to add another button to toggle the music on and off, some people like silence.

Overall a good effort. Just add some buttons and it will be a great tutorial. You got the art talent, just work on your flash skillz which I understand will take time to develop. I look forward to your future tutorials.

skull-basher responds:

Thank you!..yea I know im no good at flash...thats why I made a tutorial...but can anyone give me an actionscript for the whole "next frame" button?..I cant get it right!!

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optimise the sound dammit!

skull-basher responds:

alright

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I didn't like your movie too much, but I like the music. Curious, whats the name of that band?

skull-basher responds:

taunami bomb