Really good for your first try
At least that's what i think, since i haven't submitted my first try yet. I love the choice of music (what game is that again? it's killing me that i can't remember), and the memories as the bunny thingy falls. I'll look for more from you.
THX! :)
the "music" from ninja gaiden [NES]
Hey for a first attemt not too bad at all
keep up the good work this is way better ten my first attempt i see alot of potential in you, good luck :D
Well done!
Despite its basic nature, this flash was actually touching to an extent. I really enjoyed it! Now since I want to see this on the portal I think what you should do to make it better and survivable is give a little bit of a background on why the rabbit wants to kill himself. I also really like the old school Nintendo sounding music you have as the background! Add to it, fix it, and resubmit it! You’ll have a 5 out of me.
please make it better
this has so much promise it is almost depressing how it fell short. still i don't mean to belittle what you have accomplished. this was actually pretty nice. the bunny needed more time to show why he would kill himself. maybe you could insert a montage of him being laughed at by his fellow forest creatures, and have him looking dejectedly into a pond at his reflection. also you need to spend more time on the pictures of his life as he is falling, make them slower to fade out and move. i gave this a five because it needs all the help it can get to stay alive. but pleas make another better one. btw, keep the animation the same. it works perfectly for this
Not Bad
Kinda pointless...but funny