has potential
I really did like your intro, I think that if it all had that eerie mood to it then it could turn out pretty cool. The only issue I had with it was the fact that he was holding his crotch after he started walking, was he goin to the bathroom or somethin?
That was some peice of s...!!!!
What the hel you wasted a few seconds of my life for that peice of crap. You should be ashamed.
Unfinished?
You didn't finish or something? No, I still don't think this is the right one, lol...
+'s = Interesting cartooning.
... ... ... ...and... then what...?
Great animation at the beginning of the piece. ..Again, I'm not a fan of stick-figure-like pieces, but at least the people had some thickness to them.
The problem is, though, that this piece seems to want to end on a climax that will get viewers to ask, "Oh my Gosh?!!,...What happens next?!!"... The feeling I got from this was more like, "Oh my Gosh... ... ... ...and,...what else...?"
It's almost like this piece was the beginning of a novel where all you got was, "It's the year 2007," and that's it. "What about the year 2007?" "What's the importantce of this event happening?" "Why should I ask for more?"
Lastly, I would suggest using cueing buttons for the text so that the text wasn't going by too fast for outside viewers. When I'm done reading what someone is saying, I want to be able to choose when to continue, especially if my wife walks into the room topless, or if I'm watching a good show of sorts.
Again,...These are just suggestions... It's all up to the creator to decide how much he/she wants to put into this. If you have a complete storyline to go with this...Go With It!!!
cool
This could be a really good movie, but where did the rest go? it just ends like that??? odd oh well um graphics need lots of improving and don't really suit this sort of movie, the sounds where very nicely done in the parts it had sound, its to bad it wasn't the whole way. oh well nice movie, good luck finishing it