real good for a first shot
hey man, this was awesome for a first flash, but obviously there's some room for improvement. Try to get a faster/smoother animation, more detailed sound figures, and less fuzz in the sound department. Also, the lighting seemed to vary from shot to shot, you might want to try and find the cause for this and fix it. But, overall it was great, i hope there's more to come
Claymation for the first time IS always tough...
You're following the great road to claymation, my friend. Aardman (not on Newgrounds, but did "Chicken Run" and "Wallace and Gromit"), KNOX, and I'm sure there are more out there, have probably started out just like you. Sometimes you have this image in your head that the clay will follow it, but it's easier to think about it, than doing it. I gave you a "7" for effort and "4" for submitting!!
cool
Pretty good claymation. Also good music. Quality flash
hmmm
K Im giving you advice by saying that u need to pin down the webcam so u dont see the walls moving back and forth every frame/.
not only that but make it smoother....much smoother. then ill give u a higher score!
Hmm
Well, you ask for our opinions, so I'll share mine.
Maybe you get make quality submissions using claymation SOMEday, but not until you:
1) Smooth out the animation. That was choppy as hell.
2) Submit something that's actually funny/interesting to watch. I struggled to watch that all the way through.
3) Good sound quality... just horrible music. I have no words.
C'mon, buddy. You can do better than this.