Wonderful, very nice
I loved it, 'twas great. It had an aura to it that made it even better. Sure, you can do as nak said and work on more humorous scenarios, but don't stop with these if ya don't want to. You seem very talented at it. And although there wasn't any violence and it wasn't supposed to be funny, I couldn't stand the thought of giving you anything less than an 8 on any of them. Keep up the good work.
alright for your first
But i have to say i was bored. Next time you make a flash, try something that makes people happy and maybe gives them something to laugh about.
It was.....
Pretty good for your first flash, it kept me interested for awhile and then I got bored. Really good for first though, although somewhat depressing. Keep it up!
Good Job
This was pretty good for your first. not bad at all.
Cool for 1st
Not bad for your first try. Try going for some violence or humor if you're gonna make it big on THIS site though. But still, nice for your 1st.