Simple, but elegant
The graphics are insanely simplistic, but the style alone is very artistic. I gave it a five for protection reasons. The music really makes the piece, and it was an excellent choice. This was an excellent first attempt at flash. Goodluck in the future.
PS Goodluck getting this onto Newgrounds. This style is not very commonly found here (something lacking violence and/or humor), so the audience might not be too kind. Don't let that get you down though.