10 votes and only 3.38 ?
fuck ... no way
that should be fixed
you get better and better ... i should check your music more often
and 5 bomb from time to time ;)
10 votes and only 3.38 ?
fuck ... no way
that should be fixed
you get better and better ... i should check your music more often
and 5 bomb from time to time ;)
Tempus, a Journey of Climatic Overture
Again you demonstrate the mastery of gentleness incorporating instruments appropriately, and then WHAM!!!..... you build it up! Though it may be a repetitive theme for most of the piece, it retains the high quality I've come to identify you with! ---- JaiKiri
What's a Tempus?
Anyways, I'm glad you've noticed a pattern in my music. There's not many who can, and I hope you will continue to listen and support my future tracks.
Thanks for the review,
Bosa
a little repetitive in some parts
but you kept adding new little bits here and there really making you listen to the melody, you kept a good rythm
Perhaps I should have increased the tempo on the second key change, but it's too late now.
Thanks for taking a listen, and good luck in your future.
Dramatic
You manage to keep a pretty dramatic mood throughout, which seems appropriate given the context. Musically, I'd liked to have seen a little bit more development (akin to what you've done to the theme in the ending section) - many of the variations are just transposed sections of the motif in the beginning with slight changes in instrumentation. But it's a solid piece of work, and one I could certainly imagine in a game. Nice job.
Thanks for the review and criticism.
What do you propose I should have done in the ending section? I tried to perhaps keep a familiar mood in the song, but I also tried to not be too repetitive, yet I believe I've failed on that subject. So should I have added a new melody or what? Of course, it's too late now, but it's always good to receive feedback from fellow musicians.
nice pieace
not bad.....well to be honest pretty good...i look forword to ur other pieces
Thanks.......for the...review. I look forward to hearing from you again.