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i definitely see you going somewhere with this. your drawings are there... it just needs to flow a lil better... and proportion is something to keep practicing on (like the last guy said).
ritey-o.
Reviews for "DBZ: Vegeta's Past Part1"
im tired of those stupid reviewers
Reviewers like "TheTorch" are useless,this isnt shit.
The music use was exellent,you used the original music and used it in exellent places,hence,most artist problems are when to put the music.
The story is very original,kudos to you,exept the fact that Krillin attaked Lord Grum,ASSUMING he did destroy the city(He did,but he could be attacking an ally;)).
The only REAL proble in this animation are graphics,you can improve that,i must admit the hair is pretty hard to do, especially in flash,ut try besting the body,they sometimes looked to thin, and the arm also TOO thin.
Good flash,finish it,i wanna see the rest:)
-Archile,the real FLAME-
Agramon responds:
thanks pal. i know the arms are too thin. but not to worry about this episode. the next one is heaps better. i up dated this one, its a bit better. smaller and the subtitle are better.
disiduous
it's obvious you put a lot of work into this thing. and work often equals quality flash. yet i amazed at how bad this is for the amount of work that was put into it.
Agramon responds:
Yeah i did put a lot of work into this. and your right, its not the best there is. but it sets the story for the next one which is superior to this one. (not hard to beat this one.)
hey i like, not bad
art needs a little work, animation is fine, good call using the music from the origionl anime, improve the art thats all i have to say and ur good to go, other than that keep up the good work, btw thanks for makin vegeta the hero that killed cell
Not bad, not bad...
I won't sugar-coat it... the artwork was shit. However, that's nothing you can't improve upon. Flesh out the story a bit more and you'll have a DBZ story worthy of Toriyama! As for the music, next time stick just to the Japanese soundtrack. The sound was fine until you inserted the American music.
Agramon responds:
my artwork does need work, you're right but its not shit. just take a look at my second one when it comes out. I cant get enough of the japanese soundtrack to match the story. I have to improvise alot. Thanks for the response though.