Quoi?
Ok...this whole I hate myself for no reason and perceive non existent pain thing isn't good for anyone. I checked your age in your profile so I understand why you hate the world but believe me once you starting get laid (by girls who don't dress in clothing from Hot Topic or Torrid) all that anger/depression/bullshit will go away. The graphics were good but the point is about as dead as your story's protagonist.
Btw nice use of the Nine Inch Nails instrumental from Broken