Good
First of all, I don't know why people are complaining about this being short...its right there in the name. Anyways, I thought this was good for your first sprite movie and since it was an introduction a movie. Only suggestions are to make the the backgrounds and such a bit more detailed and work on the tweening.
Thanks for an honest, nice, and fair review. You are probably one of the most kindest of all reviewers. I praise you also for pointing out the "Short" issue.
hmmm...
that wasn't really great, although i have to say that the animation was smooth. Except for the beginning, FlatulentFox was right about that. One little tip: you should present the word "nightmare" when the rough music starts, not while the 'nice' music is still playing. You'll have a little surprise effect then.
Thanks for your excellent advice. Yes, on my next movie I will be sure to shorten the beginning. Thanks for the nice comment on my "smooth" animation, though it was sort of choppy. If someone could teach me all the methods of motion tween, it would really help. And the rough music thing... i tried that, and it was my first idea. I wanted the sudden change to happen as it appeared, and a blinding flash, but it didnt turn out correctly, and messed up some of the other music flow. Oh well... thanks for noticing that and writing a review with nice advice.
funny
I like that minigame where was Strawberry clock
Oh... thanks for reviewing! :)
I WANT TO DRIVE RIGHT NOW!!
One of SBCs classic lines. Love it.
Otherwise I wasn't too impressed by this sprite movie. Sorry.
I know it sucks badly doesnt it? Glad you liked it though! :)
bof
that could be better but i love the end with strawberry clock
Thanks for writing...