Bit short
The short seemed to just be credits. But I liked the funny mini-game at the end.
Reviews for "Kirby's Nightmare Short"
beanies520 responds:
Yeah it is sorta a "cast introduction". The real movie will not be out shortly... probably maybe late winter, or possibly next year in spring/summer. I dunno I dunno... the minigame... lol... it brings back memories. thanks for the review!
hmmm...
that wasn't really great, although i have to say that the animation was smooth. Except for the beginning, FlatulentFox was right about that. One little tip: you should present the word "nightmare" when the rough music starts, not while the 'nice' music is still playing. You'll have a little surprise effect then.
beanies520 responds:
Thanks for your excellent advice. Yes, on my next movie I will be sure to shorten the beginning. Thanks for the nice comment on my "smooth" animation, though it was sort of choppy. If someone could teach me all the methods of motion tween, it would really help. And the rough music thing... i tried that, and it was my first idea. I wanted the sudden change to happen as it appeared, and a blinding flash, but it didnt turn out correctly, and messed up some of the other music flow. Oh well... thanks for noticing that and writing a review with nice advice.
Funny
First off, I am not giving you the points just for the joke, although it was funny.
The fighting wasn't that great, although the sprites worked well.
I've seen the way you respond to your viewers, but I do have to say the beginning is much too slow, for a second I thought my computer was chopping it up..and that would've surprised me with a 1.8GHz 256 Ram computer. You could speed that up.
Funny minigame, I think you have lots of potential.
(I feel like an American Idol judge somehow..)
beanies520 responds:
Probably the other only nicely commented and advised review. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the feedback and your review! (and not liking it just for the joke :) )
This thing was so bad, is was actually good! o.O
I at frist was about ready to give this thing a big fat 0 while watching it and then I noticed there was a mini game as well... A chance for the flash to redeem itself in my eyes... The minigame wasn't doing it for me either until the thrid round...
THAT, was so unexpected it was downright funny to see! You people, have GOT to see this one just so you can witness what I have on this flash!
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OMFGROFLSTFUPLZTHXBYE!!! XD
beanies520 responds:
Wow... 0 but then a 10 just because of the end of the mini-game. Why does everyone vote high just for that last part? I meant for it to be funny and maybe bring up the humor, but come on... it wasnt that great enough to bring up the score THAT high.
OMG thats was so stupid
It wasn't funny, wasn't pretty, and ( sorry ) I HATED the minigame
beanies520 responds:
Neither was your review... and I hated it as well. Next time if you're going to write a review, give positive comments or feedback, maybe a few negatives, but if all you're going to do is say my flash sucks, dont bother writing; it wastes your time and mine.