Well, hot damn.
This looks like it will be a kickass series! The only suggestion I really have for you is to find some voice actors for Vein and Omega--as well as any Androids you bring in later. Aside from that, I've only got a request: KEEP OMEGA'S HAIR WHITE! Even when he powers up to Super Saiyan, I'd love to see it white instead of the usual black-to-blond change we see all the time in DBZ :)
It's wonderful work, man! You better continue with this, comprende? I love this stuff.
Bill
PS: If you decide to use voice actors, contact me, please :)