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Reviews for "Zero's Search"

it was boring

it wasn't really that good only the music it seemed so epic with the file size and how they let you upload it here but it kinda sucked

X-DrakenGard-X responds:

"it was boring"???

you're the one writing a rewiew.....

I'll give you some advice.

Unlike others, I'm going to be nice about this, by not giving you straight zeros or ones. It is true that your flash lacked a few things, which I'll point out, but by all means, your flash wasn't bad.

I'm going to start with the graphics. The pixel graphics were pretty good, but could have used some improvement. You'll know what I mean whenever you watch some flashes using pixels.

Your style was all right, but it was "just ok."

No sound. This flash would have been much better if it had some background music. Maybe three or four different pieces would have worked.

Violence. Yes, your flash DID contain violence, but would have been more exciting if Zero's life was threatened in some way. Even having more enemies pop up to kill off would have scored you a better rating.

Interactivity--I don't rate.

As far as I can tell, there was only one scene that was meant to be humorous; when Mario and the other character from Final Fantasy showed up. Personally, that just wasn't too funny. Humor is what most flashes are made of. More humor = better rating.

The ending just wasn't good. You should have extended this flash. If I were you, I would re-make this flash, and show everyone how much you've improved.

Good Luck

-Eternal_Flames

X-DrakenGard-X responds:

thanks

Its okay man

Dont worry about how people say this sucks. I beat they cant even make somthing better. But yeah, the stroy was ok and would be alot better If you upgraded it like you said you would. It would make it alot better. Im just saying here that.....most likely I cant do any better. I dont have flash so I dont know.....Just keep on trying man, you will get the hang of it!

X-DrakenGard-X responds:

random review responses are fun!!! and suicide is funny!!!

Meh needs improvement

You should make another one and spend more time and effort on it make it longer and better

X-DrakenGard-X responds:

I Know... :) working on one...

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Well,it was'nt that bad. It could've used sound,though. A flash is'nt sometimes appealing without sound.