Good for a first try.......
It wasn't as bad as people make it out to be. It wasn't really good either. With a little more practice you'll be making hit flashes.
Keep it up!
Reviews for "Zero's Search"
X-DrakenGard-X responds:
bah
boring
boring but nice music next time add more movement
X-DrakenGard-X responds:
well. i dont have music, but i have movement....
it was boring
it wasn't really that good only the music it seemed so epic with the file size and how they let you upload it here but it kinda sucked
X-DrakenGard-X responds:
"it was boring"???
you're the one writing a rewiew.....
I'll give you some advice.
Unlike others, I'm going to be nice about this, by not giving you straight zeros or ones. It is true that your flash lacked a few things, which I'll point out, but by all means, your flash wasn't bad.
I'm going to start with the graphics. The pixel graphics were pretty good, but could have used some improvement. You'll know what I mean whenever you watch some flashes using pixels.
Your style was all right, but it was "just ok."
No sound. This flash would have been much better if it had some background music. Maybe three or four different pieces would have worked.
Violence. Yes, your flash DID contain violence, but would have been more exciting if Zero's life was threatened in some way. Even having more enemies pop up to kill off would have scored you a better rating.
Interactivity--I don't rate.
As far as I can tell, there was only one scene that was meant to be humorous; when Mario and the other character from Final Fantasy showed up. Personally, that just wasn't too funny. Humor is what most flashes are made of. More humor = better rating.
The ending just wasn't good. You should have extended this flash. If I were you, I would re-make this flash, and show everyone how much you've improved.
Good Luck
-Eternal_Flames
X-DrakenGard-X responds:
thanks
Um......
I guess it was good ... just make the next one better please ^_^;