you have changed me
uselly I would never even come close to things like this and I would shoot myself in the foot with a gun everytime I listen to something like this BUT I thought about trying things out soo I did and I listened and I cried YES YOU MADE ME CRIED THE TEARS AND THE WEIRD BREATHING THING THAT SOUNDS LIKE HICUPS YES YOU MAY HAVE JUST DONE THE IMPOSSIBLE WOW IM IN SHOCK AND AWE OF YOUR SONG its great 10/10
truely amazing
one of the first songs I ever heard by you still enjoying it
this song is excellent
I only have one thing, you may go back and make your voice a little more clear. It blends into the piano, to where the piano almost mumbles you out.
Outstading work...
You really have a gift, planning on going pro sometime soon?
Anyway Mind sharing the lyrics?
Lyrics:
Once upon a time is our start
On a planet hidden deep in the stars
There's a young boy waiting
Transcending parts of silver memories
Ships arrived with the army of doom
All he hears is screaming; that will end pretty soon
Now he waits for something - hope in his heart
And silver memories
He remembers his friends and his family
How they laughed as they played
He remembers his dreams, then reality
As he sits and he waits...
Once upon a time is the start
There's no happy ending to this final part
Can you hear the pain beating in his heart
Can you see his silver - falling apart
Can you see his silver - falling apart
His silver memory...
This was certainly a great way to tell a story. Makes me want to read that actual book. "Memory Planet," sounds like something right up my ally.
Especially if the little boy learns how to transcend.
I should really finish it. I only got up to chapter 15 or so... hmm...