Colour would make this awesome.
Not a bad piece at all - I like the way that this is taken from Madness Combat 9, only from a different angle. Adding some colours and background detail would do such a massive boost to the piece, it's incredible. Face it, Madness just doesn't look good in white, as most of the characters in it are grey or darker.
Some shading in place of the absence of colour would have helped, especially on Hank and with Jebus' beard and shades. I personally think that when those details are added, you'd be onto a winner, but the colour would be the best possible option. If you're drawing by hand and scanning, head down to a local craft supplies and get yourself some coloured pencils - it would make such a difference, especially if you sketch lightly with pencil, colour over the top and then ink in the outlines afterwards. Have a go and see what you think.
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