you need colours man...
Colours would indeed improve this art a whole lot more.
As it is, its alreay not bad for a sketch. Idea was a pretty good one and i liked the way taht u portrayed it.
the outlines are great although, seeing as its a sketch, they could be better.
What would really take this to its full potential would be a background and colours for the foreground. Its a bit too simple as it is now and u really have something which u could develop here.
Overall, its not a bad job, but if u work on the negatives mentioned, u'll do even better.
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