I liked it
I thought that was really good... The sad music really complimented it and made it well done.
Reviews for "Insomnia - Starring Eddie"
So this is how it starts
I saw the second one first, but oh well, it's still good to see how he became the way he did. Reminds me of fight club where Edward Norton was an insomniac.
Not bad atall
For a first flash movie this is very good, well thought out, quite heartfelt, i thought the music went very well with the character, nice job! Keep making them.
Pretty good.
You've managed to produce something with a story, which is pretty rare on Newsgrounds. For those of you who panned this, consider: it starts with a premise, builds slowly and logically, and ends with the climax. There is a conflist to be overcome, some basic characterization, and a satisfying denouement. Isn't that a story?
True, it could be longer (and the narrative exposition over the doorways really didn't grab me -- a basic tenet of good storytelling is, "show me, don't tell me") but what's there is a solid, well produced, well thought out effort.
(I couldn't find the "secret ending" either.)
ScottHanstein responds:
Thanks for the review everyone. I really appreciate the positive feedback. And the negative feedback is always amusing. To see the alternate ending, when you get to the credits...click the upper right hand corner. It isn't all that great, I was just bored and I thought it would be cool.
I actually liked this!
I've been rating on Newgrounds for a few years now, and every now and then a stick figure movie comes across my screen and actually impresses me...today was such a day. The plot line was simple, and I could relate to it. The movements were smooth, and the composition of each frame made for an easy watch. Thank you for adding a great movie to the stickfigure genre.