Reviews for Insomnia - Starring Eddie

[PharmakosChroster]

Pretty good.

You've managed to produce something with a story, which is pretty rare on Newsgrounds. For those of you who panned this, consider: it starts with a premise, builds slowly and logically, and ends with the climax. There is a conflist to be overcome, some basic characterization, and a satisfying denouement. Isn't that a story?

True, it could be longer (and the narrative exposition over the doorways really didn't grab me -- a basic tenet of good storytelling is, "show me, don't tell me") but what's there is a solid, well produced, well thought out effort.

(I couldn't find the "secret ending" either.)

ScottHanstein responds:

Thanks for the review everyone. I really appreciate the positive feedback. And the negative feedback is always amusing. To see the alternate ending, when you get to the credits...click the upper right hand corner. It isn't all that great, I was just bored and I thought it would be cool.

[Kabuu]

Wow, great job!

For once, someones first submission DOESN'T completely suck! Sure, you could work with color, and maybe a little more animation of the limbs, but this is much better than half the crap that enters the portal daily. Very nice job, keep em' coming. =)

P.S.-I can't find the secret ending! Argh! If ya want to, respond to this review and tell me how to find it. ;) (respond to reviews through your profile)

[BeastfromtheEast]

awesome

thats some good shit right there. it hit really close to home.

[LunaChurch]

Thats me!!!!!

Shit, i do that alllllllll the time! fucking insomnia, you should make a part 2 where he goes on a speel deprived rampage! lol! good job, i give you a 5, lates!

Luna Church

[buko]

Great Job

I really like your style, especially the "to the kitchen" directives above the door as the guy walked through. The story could be a developed more, but it works as is. The music was a great touch.