excellent
made for TV
the only problem is if u want this to be on TV u need a better voice actor, and you need to add some finishing touches o ur graphics i noticed that his head was too big in some scenes
but hey thats for TV, if this is for flash then dot bother changing a thing its very very good
kepp up the good work
Nice
One of the best movie out there and who ever dos not agree......you must be WACKED not to like this
This flash is going somewhere good...
We're all happy to have flash like this one, that's one of the reasons to go to newgrounds!
WOW
im stunned.. that was soooo awesome unlike any flash ive seen b4 it blows out ur first 4 chapters keep it and good luck
I don't care what they say.
That was godly, can't wait unitll episode 2.