Hey! Saw yah at shockanime forums
I first wanted to say that alot of the people saying that the narration was weird, or the plot wasn't well described or whatever..
WATCH THE OTHER EPISODES!
There are 4 episodes before this one; this ep was really a prequel to the rest of them. Anyways yea I loved this stuff, seriously and that little Gen ryu cameo was lovable as well; a work of art man :-D I MUST see more
I lIke....
It moved me.. a very good plot.. a sad sad soul looking for a partner... really man.. it moved me...
sweet
Yo this is really someting, and done all by urself, anyway i think this is 1 of the first quality submissions ive seen on NG.... hell I think that if you put together a good team and put together some good action this could be realy good.
YaY arrogancey
hee hee ok that was some creepy shit at the beging but it was great i loveed it and it was so cute how mira was a cerese hee hee
;; see ya space cowboys ;;
p.s hee hee i love arrogancey
Thank god, better voice acting.
Now you got the idea, except you don't have to treat the audience like a bunch of unintelligent fools, no offence, constructive critism, try to let the viewers figure some stuff out. Instead of being like "Oh, no I will have to get closer." like in that one episode say "Fuck, its time to get up close and personal" and have him dash up and put a whole in his fucking leg with a peice of corn on the cob.