Eh...
... your proportions are getting better, but what the heck was that? It was almost set up as a trailer, but too long... I don't know what you were going for, but you didn't get it; this seemed like a summary of everything you've already done, something that could have been said in a paragraph, not requiring an entire animation.
And the sound was hollow and distant... it was like the guy was talking to a wall.
Don't get me wrong, you have potential, but, man... if you're going to spend time on something, make it count.