Wow, im impressed,
you said you werent good at flash, but the truth is, that was very good, what most people dont understand is that its a part of your life... not just a shmoe movie, that is what makes it so good.
i actually enjoyed watching it, i gave it a 9... your style and drawings are excellent, keep working youll get as good as will stamper someday, atleast thats what im trying for, itll take some time though... -your bud
-Nataku