((( HMMMM OK )))

Hey that was a good start, i dont know if that was your first film, but its decent, the animation seemed good just choppy, maybe increase the frame rate, good story starter, but i would like to see more detail within the story aswell, keep on flashing though...

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ummmm

sorry but i wasnt feeling your flash...i thought he was suposed to be a criminal what the hell did he take????

err... SECRETS AND LIES!

First of all, u've submitted this b4, i've already seen it, secondly, u have other submission by you, which means ur a liar looking to impress people to vote higher than u deserve, u sly bastard ;) good plan tho

Not bad

Not the best but not bad at all for a first effort. the animation and sound need a bit of work but you are headed in the right direction. keep trying

Way Above Average For A Beginner!

Excellent job man! You have EXTREMELY great potential. Is this REALLY your first animation in Flash?

I gave the graphics a 7 because the graphics were a bit mis-shaped but they were still excellent and I could tell that you actually put a lot of effort into making this!

I gave your style an 8 because you used that sweet oldskool type of tween animation! Brings back old NG memories.

I gave the sound a perfect ten because it is AMAZING how well you optimized the sound while still keeping the excellent quality of it and a small file size.

I gave violence a zero only because there is none. Not a bad thing, its just that there is none so it doesn't apply.

I gave the interactivity a 9 because you included a standard preloader and play button. The NG preloader is so convenient.

I gave humor a zero for the same reason that I gave violence a zero.

Overall, this is excellent Flash for a beginner! I really hope to see more of your work on NG in the future! Keep it up!