Lol!

I actually laughed quite a bit at that! I thought the idea was rather used, but your plot was decent. The random violence crossed stick movie crossed low-class humour is kind of old now, but nevertheless, it did get a laugh out of me.

Just develop your flash skills a little more. Make a few more movies, experiment with effects. Also, there is an ability to compress sound, so use that to fit it all in. =)

~VelvetDarkRocks~