oh wow you just showed how people wrote in the 2000s!!!

Did people really talk like that back then? Hahah

a guy who has no life is trying to be an internet tough guy
gets the shit kicked out of him

quite funny actually

Kind of short

Wow, it's not often that you stumble across a flash that's so intriging like this one you have here. This really makes me want to go back and think and check this one out again, this is something that i would suggest to friends to see. So first of all nice "INTRO" it kinda was interesting, well while tis was an older flash it was alright it was kind of "SHORT" though so there are some extra you can throw in, i mean it was over before it started so there could jsut be more overall depth toit, the sound/fx wasnotbad, and the music was alright, but i still found it to be somewhat entertaining, hope to see more soon. It's great to see so many different things. on this fine website of newgrounds and you get to see stuff like this one you have now, so props to you on something pretty interesting, So as i run through your flash more i get more excited and so on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would probably say it could be a little longer. Granted, length never stopped something from being great before. I knew I was in for a doozy with thisone. The film could be longer with more content more scenes and just more stuff going on.

meh

just tried to call the cops on newgrounds, instead this crappy flash came up.
i would suggest taking more time drawing and generaly follow every single tutorial whether it's related to flash or not