Pretty pointless

Was that really a preview, or an intro to episode one?
Regardless, the animation was cheap and there was no substance to it.

interesting

well this wasn't what i was expecting, cute though I cant wait to see the rest.

I'll be frank....

I really don't understand your stuff

This just aint right

first of all credit your music please, I think I heard the japanese song once in Gundam Wings or Gundam Seed.
Second, remove all of that clock-stuff bullshit, it just doesn't make any sense.
Third, why does someone wants to attack a tree and why does a robot gets turned on by a girl in a jar.

Die Tree?

so .... a storm is coming... and the idiot hero decides to attack a tree?u cant be serious.this needs alot of work.keep practicing im sure u will improve.