Even if you just give in, they will just want more
Not great, poor animation with no real point to be seen...
Author Comments
Hey Newgrounds, ok this is my first submittion into newgrounds and im praying it gets into the portal this time. I added some music and made some changes to the text hope you like it! And yes this is loosely based on a joke from Look whose talked 3, in case this sounds familiar.
Vote nicely and gracisouly and please leave some reviews to tell me what i can improve and make better!
Interesting.
It's okay. If you make it a bit more with a point, that'd be nice.
Though, the little kid wanting guns is cute. He's going to grow up to be a postal worker, isn't he? ^_^
well.....keep trying
I like how you gave your point pretty fast, but try working on the graphics and plotline.
SNJ-PIccolo responds:
Ya, thanks frot he review. I am working on my drawing skills. So my nexxt flash movie "The trumpeter" will look ALOT nicer i can garentee you. As far as plotline.. its just a mintue joke not a story. but thanks for the advice
This is total crap, blam it now
one word=CRAP
Come on!
I know its not easy to make GOOD flash movies, its down right hard, and sometimes even frustrating, but you must take the time, and do it proper. Movies like this get blammed very fast, and I can almost bet that this movie took you less than one day to make. Another thing, maybe you should learn how to draw on paper, and then attempt making computer graphics...
"crawl before you walk"
I gave you 1 for trying...
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- May 14, 2003
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