Not bad!

Quite inspiring stuff, and i can see exactly where ur coming from.

A little emo music would have finised that off rather nicely but nice effort anyway!!

AAAwwwwwwwwww.....

I think I'm going to cry... sniff...sniff

needs sound

The pics and the phrases matched up very well, all it needs is sound(make sure the sound isnt annoying though)

Desperately needs music, but nice work.

Alright, I normally don't score very high on submissions that don't have original visual work. You just got a bunch of pictures off the web and posted them on flash. However, they WERE very nice pictures, and they weren't neccessarily used to make up for lack of content; so I partially let it slide. I thought the poem was really great, made lots of sense. The one thing this baby needs is some good music. Maybe some light symphony, piano, something like that. Just make sure the audio is somewhat compressed :) I like what you did here, very, very cool pictures (The moon over the ocean was my fav). Nice job, keep up the good work.

music!!

it's almost nice, all you have to do is put some music!!! it will make a big differece.
please tell me if you have put some music.
good luck