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^^Good Points^^
Seriously, i've seen people just starting Flash much better than this.
^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are terrible, so lets get that out of the way first. Your drawings are very crappy looking, and there are hardly any animations, and when there are, they look even worse. There is no music or sound effects, which are really easy to find and add. The storyline isn't very creative and doesn't have much humor or excitement in it.