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Caedare Reborn

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My First animation with flash, hope yall like it!

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I am giving u a high score

I cant even do a fucking stick falsh....good job

first time not bad

i myself has only submitted one animation, and it's something like this. Keep going, and i look forward to seeing ur improvmements. gj

uh yeah

that was sort of pointless, not bad animation for a first shot though

Not bad, for a first timer

Y'know, if this was your first flash submitted, it was actually pretty good. The graphics were rather nice, and flowed well, and your sound worked out quite nicely too.

Few things though:
The animation of the guy who stabbed himself in the head could be a little better. Y'know, instead of just tweening him from standing to the ground, make a few in-between keyframes of him actually collapsing.

Also, you could use another sound for the earthquake thing(?), because the one you had isn't very accurate, and it got annoying. Most sounds were rather nice, though.

This is your biggest problem...WHAT's THE POINT?! I can't find any kind of plot or reasoning behind this, even with the farthest stretching of my imagination. You NEED to somehow convey a point to your animation to us, even if its something simple, like a pointless fight scene. This had no backing whatsoever, and it desperately needs one.

Nice job, overall. Keep working on it, and I think you'll turn out quite nicely.
Vote: 3

Not Bad!

In fact, It was pretty good! Hey, I liked It! Good Job!

Credits & Info

Views
1,252
Votes
7
Score
3.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 1, 2003
9:39 PM EDT