that really was really bad
the thing with animations is that they take time, not just someone moving there arm, and a handgun magicly turning into a machine gun and then some fancy writing, put next to animation that isn't even yours.
I'am Starting this new Episodes call Chax.... On This one Chax kills some pokemon :)
I'am New too flash so if you have any tips or secrets please tell me :) TNX alot,
By: David Dolynny
that really was really bad
the thing with animations is that they take time, not just someone moving there arm, and a handgun magicly turning into a machine gun and then some fancy writing, put next to animation that isn't even yours.
NifflerFarmer's In-Depth Reviews
Graphics:Some aspects of this movie were eye-pleasing and rather unexpected...for the first 10 seconds. Dragging of ceratin animations make this movie seem monotonous and dull. The main character is drawn fairly well for someone new to Flash, but certainly isn't a masterpiece. Almost every other aspect of this movie consisted of either photos, clips, or simple gradient filled shapes. One thing I thought could've been seriously improved was the weapons, which resembled several random shapes attached at odd places. Detail is important.
Sound: No music. Only narrative and poorly imitated character voices. A tip for you, Dave, would be to find a sound editing program to help improve some of these imitations. Implementing this idea for your next episode will increase the points in the sound rating.
Interactivity:None. It's a sit and watch movie. No score available.
Style: A White background with minimal animation on the left, and almost minimal animation on the right. This area could seriously be improved by changing things around and adding even a simple background.
Violence: This ranked a 3. That generally means that there was little violence involved, and any potentially serious violence was dumbed down to almost nothing. Little or no blood.
Humor:Dave, you sound like you have your heart in the right place, and it would do you good to keep practicing humor. You tried pretty hard with this movie, but you just need a little more of a concept to base your movie off of than the sheer fact that you would see several cartoon characters (though widely hated and despised) be shot to death. Work a little more in this department, and your next episode should do fine.
Overall: The effort in humor saved this movie from leaving with anything more than a 2. Overall Score: 3
This warrants a 1 according to the Newgrounds Rating System. Just brush up on your Flash skills and get a few humourous ideas in your head about your next episode. I wish you the best.
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1. Pokemon Die...
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1. Just About..Everything =\ No Plot, Bad Graphics, bad Sound...Just Ewww
First Off, I'm Surprised You Can Even SAY Penetrate...And The Sad Part Is.. You Know All Their Names...=( And Thanx For The Pikachu Singing Thing, I Blushed Cuz I Feel Bad FOR YOu And I'm Tryin To Picture You Sittin There Giving Birth To This Shit..
Not anything I haven't seen before... Sorry.
Pokemon death humor is pretty cliché, wouldn't you agree? That's in the same vein these days as a Barney shoot-em-up. It's just all been done before, man.
The concept of this Flash just wasn't very inspired. You need to think of many other ways to make fun of Pokemon (if that's even 'the thing' anymore), because, in general, once you've seen one Pokemon first-person shooter, you've seen them all. I did like how Chax was drawn, and your recording sounded fine. But again, it was the content that took this one's quality rating down. Try again.
Well, it didn't COMPLETELY suck...
Er... as far as newbie Flash is concerned, this ain't bad, but the idea is pretty old and the animation and sound leave much to be desired. Try something new and brushen up on your Flash skills before sending anything else new in.