Yey to the N00bs
Lets all help the n00bs in your brothers class, woo hoo n shit!
Author Comments
This is a flash movie I made for my brother's class. It is designed to help people making movie clips and alphas, so I thought that it might help some noobs on newgrounds :D
Enjoy
Could be useful to flash artists,but not to me
This can be useful with flash artists,but not me.
I'm not saying that is bad,but this is good for flash artists who want to make that.
anyways,this is good and helpful for flash artists
Thank you
We need more people like you. People who know how do something, and instead of spitting of those who don't, share their knowledge, instead of using it to make some stoner movie or something pointless. Thank you!
Very Nice Tutorial
I applaud you. Anybody who is willing to teach someone else to do something with patience should definitely do so! And you did a great job.
Anyway, to the review:
Graphics - 10
The graphics wouldn't get a ten for an actual feature length (for flash newayz) movie, but this is only a tutorial, and you kept it simple just like it should be.
Style - 10
I like that comic style you used in the tutorial. Not only is it cool looking, it keeps the viewer from closing it on the first few frames and saying "this is shite" So it will catch the viewer's attention and make it a bit more 'fun.'
Sound - 10
I gave it a ten because you used no sound and tutorials need no sound anyway so you knew that you didn't need to waste any file size on sound.
Violence - 0
I gave it a zero because there wasn't any. But thats a good thing in this case!
Interactivity - 10
You didn't do one of those tutorials that automatically go to the next step before the viewer is able to finish reading it. Instead, you provided NEXT and BACK buttons so the viewer could go through at his/her own pace. Also, you let them start over if needed when they get to the last step. More tutorials should be structured like yours is.
Humor - 0
I gave humor a zero because this is a tutorial, not some funny cartoon. But the zero is good in this case, considering its a tutorial. I gave humor a zero because you didn't put any in to sidetrack or confuse the viewer. Instead, you kept it straight to your point.
Overall - 10
This tutorial should be the example people use to structure other ones!
Great job!
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i gave you a 5...the way i see it, anyone willing to take the time to teach people how to use something step by step, is cool
represent.