to fast no voice

the movie was to fast i wasnt able to read it all there, weren't voices but other than that it was crappy no offnce don't resubmit it untill u fix it

has potential

add sound and slow the text down a bit

((( LOOKS GOOD )))

Hey looks good, almost artistic, the text bar moves too fast doesnt give you enough time to read it, nice mystic style of music, looks like a good start, needs abit of work though...

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Very good start...

A little slower text and longer animation, and I think that this could be the start of a very interesting series... Please make more. You got a 5!! :)

Needs improvements

I'm not entirely sure what's going on in the story line, but you may want to improve the duration at which the text is displayed, it goes through it so fast I don't have time to read it. Also you may want to look through some flash tutorials/help files to get that play button working.
The character info goes through way too fast to read so you may want to get flash to stop with a button allowing you to proceed - allows you to read it all.