Practice drawing - watch animations and study what you like. You have a lot of room for improvement just don’t quit. Keep going.
Rex had always been fascinated by the mysteries of the Veridian Forest. Known for its thick canopy and hidden dangers, it was a place where only the bravest Pokémon trainers ventured. Rex was determined to make a name for himself, and he wasn’t going alone—his trusty companion Reggie, a resilient Ratatat, was by his side.
Reggie wasn’t just any Ratatat. He had been born and raised in the depths of the Veridian Forest, and his life had been shaped by one terrifying event. When Reggie was still young, the King of the Forest, a powerful, elusive creature that few had ever seen, attacked his home. Many feared this legendary Pokémon, rumored to be a massive Beedrill that ruled the forest with an iron sting. Reggie had narrowly escaped that day, but the memory of the attack left a lasting scar.
Now, years later, Rex and Reggie were back in the forest, not as mere survivors, but as hunters. They weren’t interested in revenge—they sought something greater. Rex believed that if they could capture the King of the Forest, they would prove their strength and establish themselves as formidable trainers. For Reggie, it was more than just a test of strength; it was a way to face his fears and confront the monster that had once terrorized him.
As they navigated the forest, Rex carefully studied the map while Reggie used his heightened senses to scout for any signs of the King’s presence. The forest was eerily quiet, the usual buzz of Pidgey and Caterpie replaced by an uneasy stillness. Rex felt the weight of the forest’s eyes upon them, as if the very trees were watching their every move.
Suddenly, Reggie stopped in his tracks. His ears perked up, and his nose twitched, picking up a scent. Before Rex could ask what it was, the sound of wings flapping echoed through the trees, followed by a low, menacing hum. The King of the Forest had arrived.
Emerging from the shadows, the massive Beedrill hovered above them, its stingers gleaming in the dappled sunlight. Rex felt a surge of adrenaline. “Reggie, this is it!” he shouted. But Reggie didn’t need to be told twice. With a swift nod, the Ratatat darted forward, agile and fearless, ready to face the creature that had haunted his past.
The battle was intense, the forest becoming a whirlwind of buzzing wings, sharp attacks, and lightning-fast dodges. Reggie’s speed was unmatched, but the Beedrill’s power was overwhelming. Still, they pressed on, working as a team, never losing focus.
With one final, perfectly timed Quick Attack, Reggie managed to knock the King off balance. Rex seized the opportunity, throwing an Ultra Ball with all his strength. Time seemed to slow as the ball spun in the air before striking the Beedrill. It shook violently as the creature inside fought back, but after what felt like an eternity, the ball clicked shut.
Rex and Reggie stood in stunned silence for a moment, realizing what they had just accomplished. The King of the Forest was theirs. Reggie, once a victim, had become a champion. And together, they had proven that no challenge was too great when they fought as one.
The Veridian Forest would never be the same again.
shout out to TheReaperPepper who made the soundtrack. Thank you to Newgrounds and the users who always motivate us to keep making stuff for the fun of it.
Practice drawing - watch animations and study what you like. You have a lot of room for improvement just don’t quit. Keep going.
awesome!
Keep up the good work!
I understand that Flash, and animation in general is a notoriously difficult art to master for a lot of people, and not many people have the time, energy, or motivation to produce masterpieces, but this movie leaves a lot to be desired, to put it nicely. You wrote a story that could serve as a good brainstorm, a proof-of-concept for the animation, but it feels all concept, and no content.
There are a lot of issues. A lot. There are no sound effects, so it's hard to keep track of Reggie and the Beedrill's fight, and it makes the Viridian Forest feel lifeless. The choppy animation and lack of movement (Reggie and the Beedrill are just translating across the screen) also makes it hard to understand what the characters are doing or how they are interacting with each other, and as a result, the fight looks unfinished and unrealistic. Another problem is pacing: everything is going too fast for the small amount of scenes and camera angles, and I had to rewatch it multiple times to comprehend the story. Show, don't tell, as some people have said below...
These are some of the main principles of animation, which you should consider studying (I recommend Alan Becker's video on them) before all else. It's difficult for the audience to understand or even care about what is happening in your story without. You need to put more time into making this more full-on. You have the idea, just put your mind to and work on it, maybe see some example Movies here, you might be surprised by what you make :)
it's decent to say the least, i recommend learning some composition and how to animate to help make someting a little more appealing, it'll take some time but I'm sure it's gonna be worth it
also like EmsDeLaRoz said, try to show the story you wanna tell through the animation instead of a long description people will most likely ignore
sorry if this comes off as mean spirited, i just wanted to try and give off my opinion