Oh jeeze

I can give you my honest opinion or I can lie to you. Either way, you'll probably end up crying. I thought it might be interesting because I like Final Fantasy stuff. I was dissapointed. There wasn't a whole lot of movement at all and it looks like you spent all of 5 minutes drawing with a crayon. It could have actually been acceptable if you had spent a little time polishing it up.

One word.

Crap. No offense, but is the first day you even tried making anything? Things are poorly drawn, and is kinda boring to watch. It does show some promise if you ever get around to making it interactive and using half way decent graphics. But even then it will still be crap. Instead of submitting unfinished things, considder completing them and THEN sending them in, they might last longer.