The game is good for what it is, but there's a few things that kind of eat at me.
1. There's no way to zoom in on the images in-game, and as far as I could discern, there's no way to get back to the main menu to look at the gallery after you start the game. The game should really return you to the main menu after you get an ending instead of looping imo.
2. I had to refresh the page, not because the game had frozen or anything but because no matter what options I chose, Mike kept waking up late on day 2 even if I chose to virtually ignore Alice and go to bed early every day. This got fixed after I refreshed but I have no idea why it occurred.
3. If you look really close at the phone text, you'll notice the letters are sometimes really close together or are having the edges cut off. IE: "I'm just sitting on the couch. Had a hard day at work. What about you?" has the bottom of the Y in "you" shaved off.
4. The music is repetitive in a way I find grating. This isn't necessarily strictly your fault, I feel the same way about the music in a lot of VNs.
These are all kind of small points. The one big criticism I have is that I think this game should've been longer than it is. An extra five-ten minutes in play time to better wrap up the Friend ending and an opportunity to actually talk to Alice in the romance ending would go a very, very long way. Having an extra character frame for her like Jenny's would go an extremely long way here! Imagine all of that filling the screen instead of just in faceless images!
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