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People really hated this and so did I

But i no i not lie

You need major help...

First off, get a dictionary and learn how to spell shit properly. Second, work on your art and animation. I've crapped out prettier things than that. Third, get better music. The DBZ sound bytes were decent, but the tunes blew. Finally, never post on here again until all the problems are corrected, or else you will get blammed!

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same thing only beter

Some Pointers

SPELLING - ALWAYS use a dictionary and spell check if your toons are going to rely on text to the tell the story. The incredible amount of errors detract from the flow and telling of the story because it makes it difficult to read.
SOUND - try and make the music a constant. Each time someone "speaks", it cuts out abruptly and kills the mood.
ANIMATION - this toon would have benefited from a couple of frame-by-frame animations since the characters were drawn in an oversimplified manner. It would have spiced things up a bit instead of simply motion tweening. Places where this method could have been used - the building and throwing of the fireballs.
ORIGINALITY - Lord Raiden is a Mortal Kombat character and looks like he was designed after Christopher Lambert in the movie. The voices when the fireballs are thrown are from Dragon Ball. The "li'l ninja" looks like a yellow Kirby. Design your own characters and your own sounds and you can truly say you created this entire piece.
This advice is meant to help, not harm. You want to make this into a series so it's important that you make it as true to your own imagination as possible. Good luck!

You're still getting a "negitive reviwe".

This really blew. I mean, Jesus. How can you expect something like that to succeed on newgrounds? Save yourself some trouble and learn how to draw/spell/etc etc.