Meh. You can do better.

If I didn't personally know you I'd say "screw this", but since I know that you have the capability of doing better things.... FIVEN!

OK but it was sort of boring.

This was a good cool, good idea, but it was sort of boring. The pictures weren't ao good.

Interesting

You've got a unique style, dude. Keep with it.

That was very good for a first one!

I really see talent. It was cool with that slomo thing. Needed some music or something though. Make more!

Not bad for a first go at Flash

As subject, but it could REALLY do with some recorded voices.