needs some werk
u need to finish it off more...u didnt stop it from looping and u didnt stop the music other han that it was aight
Author Comments
this is my first flash, please let me know on how i can improve, so that maybe in the future, i'll submit a decent flash
Keep working
Bring this back when its finished. The opening cred's were awesome. Good style work there and I like the idea of drawing in your characters as they are introduced. Good work there.
I'd like to see more before I can critique much further.
... Oh yeah. Get a preloader for the beginning so we know that the movie is 1) loading and 2) how much is left. Thanks.
music rocked, game sucked
Definetly incomplete, nothing actually happens within the course of the movie... the credits look cool, and the music is great but... nothing happens. It has no point, no purpose in being.
apparently not
it seems people travel accross town to vote 5 at several libraries, net cafes, and schools to save their movies. and man i thought MY life sucked
killajules responds:
oh, i forgot to tell you guys that i didn't finish and i just gave up on it, it seems that my comments were also incomplete, so ya, thanks to the people that actually gave me comments and not just say blam this or whatever, event tho it will,
loved teh music??
who was the music.Also make an actualy fight the length to size ratio was horrible go take tutorial on audio optimization here at newgroudsn also make it a full fight it was jsut one punch i gave you a 5
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- Apr 6, 2003
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