Fun-nay!
Lol, awesome work, dude. Cant wait for the next one! Oh, and by the way, I love the sketchyness!
Author Comments
This is my first time animating in flash because my previous work was done with SWiSH and the last thing I made in flash was a game (e-mail me if you want it, or view it's obituary here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/rip.php?id=91395 ) It got good reviews but bad votes. Anyway, I'll make more, longer, and better Timmy movies depending on how well this does.
***EDIT***
If you're just going to review to complain about the sketchiness, bite me.
Sorry, but that's the style, that's the way I want it, and that's the way it's going to stay. There are lots of good movies I've seen with that sketchy style. Like Squigo for example. If you don't like my style, vote 0, whatever, I don't care. I make flash cartoons because it's fun, and to show my friends. I put them on here for people to appreciate as it is. Thank you.
very well
want a good vote? here you are . overall 10, a good work but make a preloader next time
JTorch responds:
Umm... it has a preloader, dude.
not too bad
well it was not too bad but i thought that the music was good until i realized that it was that finger eleven pop-up that was playing. surprisingly it went along very well.
Not half undecent
It had potential. It had intrigue. It had a neat artistic style. And it had the ultimate cop-out ending.
Let me tell you what you've done wrong/right
First off making it in black and white keeps peoples attention.
The eye is lazy and attracted to black on white.
The squggly lines effect made it SO MUCH BETTER.
The story went perfect speed. Most go too fast and you don't quite like it when you miss things.
I jumped when Timmy attacked the screen. AWESOME
PLEASE MAKE MORE SAME STYLE AND EVERYTHING!