This is the first cartoon I ever made. I made it in early 2000 after dabbling in Flash 5 the week before. I've been a long time NewGrounds viewer and it wasn't until today that it finally ocurred to me to become a member.
I have a bunch of work, movies and games, but I thought my first submission ought to come from where it all began, just to see how it measures up. I think I know, but I owe it to myself to throw in the bad with the good. Lemme know what you all think. :)
Well..it was okay.
It was ok animation and all. The voices were too quiet and the sound effects were two loud. It was a bit confusing, for one, why'd you throw a completely unrelated south park gag in there, and for another, why'd the guy just come out and cut down a telephone pole with an axe? How'd he make another call if the phone line was down?
Awesome for a first flash!
Wow, for a first flash, that's sweet. (And it couldn't be more true! )
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man,that was(too) true,ms cleo is a bunch of bull shit(i hope she reads this too)ne way,u coulda done a hell ova lot better on the graphx,take soem time out b4 ur next one.k?thnx!
sayonora,
Sir Sparky of magnatown
((( HAHAHA CLASSIC )))
that was just fun, the art was superb, and the audio was clean and sharp made me laugh really, good animation for expression, and cleo such a classic topic, hope to see more good work like this soon...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Cleo parody...
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SWEET!
Good work! wih skills like this, youll make an outstanding flash artist!