not bad for a first animation. it's been a whie since i've used flash. the text in the start that explains the story goes by a little too fast though, i didn't have time to finish reading it before it poofed. the picture seems a tad bit too dark so it's hard to see a lot of what's going on. i know it's night time so i understand that, but a little more light would make it more cohesive as to what's happening. the characters could use a little more 3D aspect as well as they tend to look a little flat and appear as more pictures on paper than live characters or undead characters for that matter. has some good ideas.